Should This Night Ever End - A Poem
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Should this night ever end
Angels shall send
down thousands of tears
echoing sadness she feels
Daggers too, shall fall down
from the heavens above
piercing that of her heart
bleeding her of her flesh
she once gave to her love
a love that once was
Should this night ever end
the ground that she stands
shall dissolve and make way
to the lair of pain
drowning out all the sounds
of white whispering screams
that escapes from her heart
reaching out to be seen
Should this night ever end
she shall drown in her tears
her heart peeled from her chest
knife deep on her thighs
just to ease all her pain
the pain that she feels
from not having you near
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ohhh theres something going on here !..awesome !
Beautiful and full of emotion!
Thank you for the comment Nell Rose.
Beautiful poem, you captured the hurt of losing a lost love, voted up!
Thank you MR SMOOTH FOR THE POSITIVE FEEDBACK.
Absolutley Beautiful!
Thank you very much, rahul0324, for the comment. It's very much appreciated.
fell in love with the pain you associated in the last stanza! brilliant show of emotion in prose. voted up!!
Thank you tillsontitan. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. This actually is an old poem that I brought out and reedited. The original is much darker, but I'm happy to say that this is no longer my experience.
AudreyHowitt, your comments are very much appreciated. Thank you.
Thank you teaches12345 for the positive feedback.
Soul searching thoughts that need an answer. Well written poem that casts a shadow over a relationship lost.
Deeply intense and personal feel to this one--Lovely job!
Very emotional! Love your choice of photo too, it fits so well. I hope this poem isn't about you mourning for someone who is not near. I voted up because it is beautifully done.
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Thank you for your comment ahorseback. I really appreciate it.